Also I have two ideas for cool shit to do in this song
15:23
1. Midway event where a fucked up version of Dennis P. Snizzle (player you play as) crawls out of evil John's chest and you rap him whilst he's inside evil John's chest
2. At the end, it could either die down or get more intense. Either way, I think it would be cool for a bg change, where instead of a forest, it's a fully crowded street where people are walking, and you can't do anything because nobody else sees him except you
Boing Bingus try not to make some of the most experimental sprites ever for a song called "the corpse is mocking me" vs a mf called Evil John challenge (FAILED)(edited)
if we're going to have an entire song with lyrics i'd rather it like not be the song that is like dead air super banger bucky 50 tempo changes
05:18
the issue aint even only with the lyrics
its fitting it in + fitting it with the mixing style + writing rap in and of itself is hard + an entire song needing to be voiced
ok a couple of things
i dont think he should rap in the guitar intro i thinks
i have an idea in my head of him kinda doing a slower repetetive flow with a focus on the lyrics
kinda mocking BOING* and shit
also yes fx bad remake
that was alls(edited)
Ok so Dennis P. Snizzle (AKA me) gets lost in the forest on the fourth of July after trying to get fireworks. He then sees the corpse that has been haunting him in his dreams, AKA evil John. He then puts up his fists and wants to fight the corpse
Halfway through the song, a dark link version of boing bingus will crawl out of and rap in evil John's stomach cavity
150 > 180 > 208 > 160 > 180 > 195 > piano section (do not write lyrics for this part probably)
only note is that i like the little descending laugh so try to do something with that
vibre ♪
150 > 180 > 208 > 160 > 180 > 195 > piano section (do not write lyrics for this part probably)
only note is that i like the little descending laugh so try to do something with that
@chito_blud btw make evil John comically mocking boing bingus
Like making fun of him
And do it in a weird monotone voice, like this gladOS from Portal 2.
Also when writing boing bingus lines, make sure he's pissed off and wants to beat the shit outta evil john
Boing Bingus
@chito_blud btw make evil John comically mocking boing bingus
Like making fun of him
And do it in a weird monotone voice, like this gladOS from Portal 2.
Also when writing boing bingus lines, make sure he's pissed off and wants to beat the shit outta evil john
@chito_blud btw make evil John comically mocking boing bingus
Like making fun of him
And do it in a weird monotone voice, like this gladOS from Portal 2.
Also when writing boing bingus lines, make sure he's pissed off and wants to beat the shit outta evil john
150 > 180 > 208 > 160 > 180 > 195 > piano section (do not write lyrics for this part probably)
only note is that i like the little descending laugh so try to do something with that
Its a nasty pedophilia drawing shits disgusting and ur a pedophile for real if you like that but at the end of the day it ain't real it just pisses me off so much when people use loli and cp interchangeable
chito_blud
So so do I continue working on these lyrics
Or is this mod cooked
Fallen through the lines jerk it back into the time where I sat on the toilet and id nut all of the time its a apart of me yet im a shell of a man many ask for videos but no one uses hands
I'm Mr.Dead Account
Fallen through the lines jerk it back into the time where I sat on the toilet and id nut all of the time its a apart of me yet im a shell of a man many ask for videos but no one uses hands
Fallen through the lines jerk it back into the time where I sat on the toilet and id nut all of the time its a apart of me yet im a shell of a man many ask for videos but no one uses hands
Yea but i didn’t export it cuz i fell asleep But yea i put some of the lyrics into synth v and the vocals are coming out really good so i can prob write alot more today
15:59
Wait maybe i can export rq, before i go to school but it wont be mixed
chito_blud
Yea but i didn’t export it cuz i fell asleep But yea i put some of the lyrics into synth v and the vocals are coming out really good so i can prob write alot more today
Vibblez alteration ideas for nicer flow:
"Fade in rain"
Match the flow in the your demise line with the previous lines, the last line of that part alr breaks up the flow enough b4 the next part
Fuck with the last "ure" rhyming part. Saying damned in one syllable is kinda crammed(edited)
150 > 180 > 208 > 160 > 180 > 195 > piano section (do not write lyrics for this part probably)
only note is that i like the little descending laugh so try to do something with that
Boing Bingus aka Dennis P Snizzle drunkenly gets lost in the forest on the fourth of July trying to get fireworks and meets the evil corpse that's been mocking and haunting his dreams face to face. Evil John can manipulate reality so that the forest is now infinite and Dennis P Snizzle can never leave. Boing Bingus is fucking fed up with this stupid fucking corpse and wants to fight it
Boing Bingus aka Dennis P Snizzle drunkenly gets lost in the forest on the fourth of July trying to get fireworks and meets the evil corpse that's been mocking and haunting his dreams face to face. Evil John can manipulate reality so that the forest is now infinite and Dennis P Snizzle can never leave. Boing Bingus is fucking fed up with this stupid fucking corpse and wants to fight it
He steps into the shadows and it turns into skeleton maze for a few seconds(edited)
08:15
You gotta take the right paths that lead you to him
08:16
Like there’s three paths and his voice will either be coming from your left speaker, right speaker, or both and you gotta take that path for like 3 or so times
this might be a really bad example since idk shit abt music but
fl studio and programs like that allow you to use panning in sounds
which makes them sound like they're coming from the left or the right
@Deleted User okay I'm gonna make five stages and this will not be apart of the song instead it will be mini game with you trying to find evil john and once you found him the song starts where it cuts to the main background I did
What if you have a fork in the road at the last section
11:22
And if you chose the last wrong one that doesn't have evil John....you get bad ending where Dennis P Snizzle dies and twitches with his head bit off
If you get good ending you get a walk cycle of boing bingus with a shovel, who just killed evil John
And if you chose the last wrong one that doesn't have evil John....you get bad ending where Dennis P Snizzle dies and twitches with his head bit off
If you get good ending you get a walk cycle of boing bingus with a shovel, who just killed evil John
I'ma break this down. I use program called blenderkit it allows me to use models that's how I made the forest background but I don't have those texture files for each model because they come in blenderkit not like how dani did it with using google images. So that's why I'm keyed to use the image I posted in here and was pinned as the background for corspe mocking me. Does this make sense?
14:55
So please just use this
twisted evil
I'ma break this down. I use program called blenderkit it allows me to use models that's how I made the forest background but I don't have those texture files for each model because they come in blenderkit not like how dani did it with using google images. So that's why I'm keyed to use the image I posted in here and was pinned as the background for corspe mocking me. Does this make sense?
I'ma break this down. I use program called blenderkit it allows me to use models that's how I made the forest background but I don't have those texture files for each model because they come in blenderkit not like how dani did it with using google images. So that's why I'm keyed to use the image I posted in here and was pinned as the background for corspe mocking me. Does this make sense?
@chito_blud when you are done with your lyrics send so i can make super vibble alterations/ideas and then well look at final product together and see if anything else need to be done
@chito_blud when you are done with your lyrics send so i can make super vibble alterations/ideas and then well look at final product together and see if anything else need to be done
Well those where just kinda supposed to only appear on screen for a few seconds before fading to tell the player “hey you’re supposed to use the arrow keys to change perspectives”(edited)
10:00
They aren’t supposed to be there the whole time
10:01
I think it would be cooler to have like a note that functions as a tutorial since we are going the minigame route(edited)
RedWave 1.0
Well those where just kinda supposed to only appear on screen for a few seconds before fading to tell the player “hey you’re supposed to use the arrow keys to change perspectives” (edited)
No just there will be mini game where you walk around in the forest in pov state and you have the arrows pointing to different spots you can go that's why I need you to make the pixel arrows
No just there will be mini game where you walk around in the forest in pov state and you have the arrows pointing to different spots you can go that's why I need you to make the pixel arrows
@twisted evil@Boing Bingus ok so big news ive managed to get the forest model ingame BUT
i wasnt able to get any of the shading and fog to loadin the 3d software i used (there werent any textures for em so it just displayed huge blank cubes)
and like i showed in the video the hanging man facing left is way off in the distance for some reason???? idfk how to fix that(edited)
@twisted evil@Boing Bingus ok so big news ive managed to get the forest model ingame BUT
i wasnt able to get any of the shading and fog to loadin the 3d software i used (there werent any textures for em so it just displayed huge blank cubes)
and like i showed in the video the hanging man facing left is way off in the distance for some reason???? idfk how to fix that (edited)
@twisted evil@Boing Bingus ok so big news ive managed to get the forest model ingame BUT
i wasnt able to get any of the shading and fog to loadin the 3d software i used (there werent any textures for em so it just displayed huge blank cubes)
and like i showed in the video the hanging man facing left is way off in the distance for some reason???? idfk how to fix that (edited)
@twisted evil@Boing Bingus ok so big news ive managed to get the forest model ingame BUT
i wasnt able to get any of the shading and fog to loadin the 3d software i used (there werent any textures for em so it just displayed huge blank cubes)
and like i showed in the video the hanging man facing left is way off in the distance for some reason???? idfk how to fix that (edited)
“Alright Evil John you wanna fight me come get it
You might have my fire-works but for a match well you’ve met it
You ain’t heard bars like mine, straight flames no fizzle
I’ll kick your ass back to the grave, ‘member the name, P Snizzle”(edited)
“Alright Evil John you wanna fight me come get it
You might have my fire-works but for a match well you’ve met it
You ain’t heard bars like mine, straight flames no fizzle
I’ll kick your ass back to the grave, ‘member the name, P Snizzle” (edited)
You don't belong here in the cold, diseased air
I'll watch your blood sear and feed on your despair
Your heart's in a gate, you'll never break it out
Know it met its due date, soon a forgotten sprout
Give in to the cyanide, let it course throughout your veins
Nobody's by your side, watch your story fade in rain
Now look right into my eyes, what's to see but yourself maimed
Give in to your demise, you think you'll ever leave a stain?
Inside this world with lies you've told,
I see it through, your life is sold
Break your future, see your failure
You know it's true, Meet your departure
It's quiet, isn't it?
What's to hear but your own slit?
All the same, IDIOTS
Just makes it less tedious
You're not unique, fighting bravely
Tear your mind and end this quickly
Keep on trying, keep on staying
Know believing ends up dying
Let your body hit the floor
And wither with the flowers
You were nothing but a spore
Stop acting like you'll matter
Don't turn around
For upon the grave they'll not mourn
You were born bound
To never be someone's concern
lines in bold are things that could be changed but i havent edited
You don't belong here in the cold, diseased air
I'll watch your blood sear and feed on your despair
Your heart's in a gate, you'll never break it outKnow it met its due date, soon a forgotten sprout
Give in to the cyanide, let it course throughout your veins
Nobody's by your side, watch your story fade in rain
Now look into my eyes, what's to see but yourself maimed
Give in to your demise, nothing of you will remain
Inside this world with lies you've told,
I see it through, your life is sold
Through the faint moans, see your failure
Through his blade honed, go engrave her (super bar )
It's quiet, isn't it?
What's to hear but your own slit?
All the same, IDIOTS
Just makes it less tedious
You're not unique, fighting bravely
Tear your mind and end this quickly
Keep on trying, keep on staying
Know believing ends up dying
Let your body hit the floor
And wither with the flowers
You were nothing but a spore
Stop acting like you mattered
Don't turn around
For upon the grave they'll not mourn
You were born bound
To never be someone's concern(edited)
Was telling my friend stuff and they told me some news, about certain someone.
I look up to so many people i adore just for them to spit in my face and make fun of me behind my back, They LIKE making fun of me they LIKE mocking me, i just want to be cool with them but i don’t get the chance.
I literally teared up and wanted to cry these we were my favorite creators and i wanted just be liked or be cool with them. But no man. I can’t even ignore it anymore it really hurts.
It hurts more when i never did anything wrong.
04:28
That makes 16 dreams crushed
chito_blud
Was telling my friend stuff and they told me some news, about certain someone.
I look up to so many people i adore just for them to spit in my face and make fun of me behind my back, They LIKE making fun of me they LIKE mocking me, i just want to be cool with them but i don’t get the chance.
I literally teared up and wanted to cry these we were my favorite creators and i wanted just be liked or be cool with them. But no man. I can’t even ignore it anymore it really hurts.
It hurts more when i never did anything wrong.
Yeah. I had thought i can handle it and i could, but this moment broke me(edited)
chito_blud
Was telling my friend stuff and they told me some news, about certain someone.
I look up to so many people i adore just for them to spit in my face and make fun of me behind my back, They LIKE making fun of me they LIKE mocking me, i just want to be cool with them but i don’t get the chance.
I literally teared up and wanted to cry these we were my favorite creators and i wanted just be liked or be cool with them. But no man. I can’t even ignore it anymore it really hurts.
It hurts more when i never did anything wrong.
Point & Click mechanic (similar to no more mama: presented with three paths and have to click the right one based in where John’s voice is coming from)
Lyrics P2
Dark Snizzle
Creepy Ballerinas & other shit join in
Snizzle dies(?)
(edited)
17:30
For the mid-song minigame it’s basically this
17:30
Except you use which speaker John is singing from to figure out which is the right path
17:31
And its point and click not free roam
sossy baka769
@Deleted User@Boing Bingus@twisted evil ive got the forest model into a song to test it with cyaracters.....
Like you could just copy some of these sections for another repeat lowkey
It jumps from idea to idea pretty quickly, so if you made them longer it would pace the song better and give more actual game time
@Boing Bingus@Deleted User I'll give short explanation as to why are there no evil john map update. I have had ton of family drama lately (Lasting 10 years now) It's catching up to me and I can't work while it's happeneding at the same time Right now my family and I are going to therapy trying to sort things out once it has helped and I'm not being paranoid then I can start here
twisted evil
@Boing Bingus@Deleted User I'll give short explanation as to why are there no evil john map update. I have had ton of family drama lately (Lasting 10 years now) It's catching up to me and I can't work while it's happeneding at the same time Right now my family and I are going to therapy trying to sort things out once it has helped and I'm not being paranoid then I can start here
Boing i will be getting like 4 new synth v voicebanks for Christmas, so like might be a little chance that i’ll make either a voice change or leave as it is for evil john.
04:46
And ima write dennis lyrics on phone cause i fucking hate atonal lyrics in synth v.
chito_blud
And ima write dennis lyrics on phone cause i fucking hate atonal lyrics in synth v.
Boing i will be getting like 4 new synth v voicebanks for Christmas, so like might be a little chance that i’ll make either a voice change or leave as it is for evil john.
150 > 180 > 208 > 160 > 180 > 195 > piano section (do not write lyrics for this part probably)
only note is that i like the little descending laugh so try to do something with that
Also i made this line a while ago for like the first verse of evil john.
Familiar face, Where?!
Look at that, i don't care
Walk to your nightmare
Time to feast on despair.
Idk i like it, little corny but feels right.
18:43
Yea maybe a whole rewrites gonna be necessary this whole writings poop from my butt
@Boing Bingus i found a new vocal style with synth v, its more like that metal shit.
so do i continue to use current voicebank for evil john, or should i use new voicebank with this metal voicebank
(song not related but its a good example)
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chito_blud
@Boing Bingus i found a new vocal style with synth v, its more like that metal shit.
so do i continue to use current voicebank for evil john, or should i use new voicebank with this metal voicebank
(song not related but its a good example)
if it makes it into the mod call the inst level HELAUGHSATTHEWICKED
vibre ♪
150 > 180 > 208 > 160 > 180 > 195 > piano section (do not write lyrics for this part probably)
only note is that i like the little descending laugh so try to do something with that
150 > 180 > 208 > 160 > 180 > 195 > piano section (do not write lyrics for this part probably)
only note is that i like the little descending laugh so try to do something with that
@Boing Bingus@Deleted User so i think this is the only song left that i haven't made a custom title card for
but i lowkey got nothing going on in my head so can u fellas maybe do a doodle or explain what you'd like to see?
@Boing Bingus@Deleted User so i think this is the only song left that i haven't made a custom title card for
but i lowkey got nothing going on in my head so can u fellas maybe do a doodle or explain what you'd like to see?
@Boing Bingus@Deleted User so i think this is the only song left that i haven't made a custom title card for
but i lowkey got nothing going on in my head so can u fellas maybe do a doodle or explain what you'd like to see?
i have some concerns about the music direction of this song
nobody has to read this, this'll kinda just be a long rant a little, but i hope at least somebody understands
ill get straight into it, there is a reason dead air songs are short. they are disjointed, fast, intense songs. theyre little bursts of an experience basically. that does not translate to a long ass irida song, because the direction of these songs seem to be that they need to be long. that's not an inherently bad concept, it just doesnt work here.
then you have the fact that boing wants to make the whooole song lyrical instead of just one section. when writing very long lyrical sections, there WILL be parts that are weak. there WILL be parts that are filler. and i do not like that. with shorter lyrical sections, there is focus. there is a certain clarity. they are OODLES easier to pull off. not that longer songs with lyrics havent been done, but they were in a different context generally.
which brings me to my next point, the fact that boing wants to make this song a two-part lyrical song. in the sense that not only does one character sing, the other does too. and i will be blunt. these DONT work. the lyrics are less subtle and the focus is divided as you must now effectively flesh out TWO characters. another gripe i have with this concept is that you tend to get "banter" lyrics, in the sense that one character will go "ooo i will murder you im evil" and then the other will go "no! i must win! i believe in myself! i will beat you!" and it ends up very corny a majority of the time. when i think of solid lyrical sections, they are always SHORT and ONE-PART.
then we get to how the lyrics will be sung. theres not much to say here except
fast lyrics + synthv as opposed to an actual va + a lot of effect + loud beat = entirely unintelligible and very much overwhelming
all of these things in combination make me very worried about the direction this song will go in
this is not intended to be insult tho(edited)
and to be honest i am okay with the idea of remaking my part/scrapping my stuff for this if it means that we can execute a better vision and make this song more polished in general
16:03
okay stupid vibre rant done
vibre ♪
i have some concerns about the music direction of this song
nobody has to read this, this'll kinda just be a long rant a little, but i hope at least somebody understands
ill get straight into it, there is a reason dead air songs are short. they are disjointed, fast, intense songs. theyre little bursts of an experience basically. that does not translate to a long ass irida song, because the direction of these songs seem to be that they need to be long. that's not an inherently bad concept, it just doesnt work here.
then you have the fact that boing wants to make the whooole song lyrical instead of just one section. when writing very long lyrical sections, there WILL be parts that are weak. there WILL be parts that are filler. and i do not like that. with shorter lyrical sections, there is focus. there is a certain clarity. they are OODLES easier to pull off. not that longer songs with lyrics havent been done, but they were in a different context generally.
which brings me to my next point, the fact that boing wants to make this song a two-part lyrical song. in the sense that not only does one character sing, the other does too. and i will be blunt. these DONT work. the lyrics are less subtle and the focus is divided as you must now effectively flesh out TWO characters. another gripe i have with this concept is that you tend to get "banter" lyrics, in the sense that one character will go "ooo i will murder you im evil" and then the other will go "no! i must win! i believe in myself! i will beat you!" and it ends up very corny a majority of the time. when i think of solid lyrical sections, they are always SHORT and ONE-PART.
then we get to how the lyrics will be sung. theres not much to say here except
fast lyrics + synthv as opposed to an actual va + a lot of effect + loud beat = entirely unintelligible and very much overwhelming
all of these things in combination make me very worried about the direction this song will go in
this is not intended to be insult tho (edited)
i have some concerns about the music direction of this song
nobody has to read this, this'll kinda just be a long rant a little, but i hope at least somebody understands
ill get straight into it, there is a reason dead air songs are short. they are disjointed, fast, intense songs. theyre little bursts of an experience basically. that does not translate to a long ass irida song, because the direction of these songs seem to be that they need to be long. that's not an inherently bad concept, it just doesnt work here.
then you have the fact that boing wants to make the whooole song lyrical instead of just one section. when writing very long lyrical sections, there WILL be parts that are weak. there WILL be parts that are filler. and i do not like that. with shorter lyrical sections, there is focus. there is a certain clarity. they are OODLES easier to pull off. not that longer songs with lyrics havent been done, but they were in a different context generally.
which brings me to my next point, the fact that boing wants to make this song a two-part lyrical song. in the sense that not only does one character sing, the other does too. and i will be blunt. these DONT work. the lyrics are less subtle and the focus is divided as you must now effectively flesh out TWO characters. another gripe i have with this concept is that you tend to get "banter" lyrics, in the sense that one character will go "ooo i will murder you im evil" and then the other will go "no! i must win! i believe in myself! i will beat you!" and it ends up very corny a majority of the time. when i think of solid lyrical sections, they are always SHORT and ONE-PART.
then we get to how the lyrics will be sung. theres not much to say here except
fast lyrics + synthv as opposed to an actual va + a lot of effect + loud beat = entirely unintelligible and very much overwhelming
all of these things in combination make me very worried about the direction this song will go in
this is not intended to be insult tho (edited)
me and havoc just charted this song it has atonals
vibre ♪
i have some concerns about the music direction of this song
nobody has to read this, this'll kinda just be a long rant a little, but i hope at least somebody understands
ill get straight into it, there is a reason dead air songs are short. they are disjointed, fast, intense songs. theyre little bursts of an experience basically. that does not translate to a long ass irida song, because the direction of these songs seem to be that they need to be long. that's not an inherently bad concept, it just doesnt work here.
then you have the fact that boing wants to make the whooole song lyrical instead of just one section. when writing very long lyrical sections, there WILL be parts that are weak. there WILL be parts that are filler. and i do not like that. with shorter lyrical sections, there is focus. there is a certain clarity. they are OODLES easier to pull off. not that longer songs with lyrics havent been done, but they were in a different context generally.
which brings me to my next point, the fact that boing wants to make this song a two-part lyrical song. in the sense that not only does one character sing, the other does too. and i will be blunt. these DONT work. the lyrics are less subtle and the focus is divided as you must now effectively flesh out TWO characters. another gripe i have with this concept is that you tend to get "banter" lyrics, in the sense that one character will go "ooo i will murder you im evil" and then the other will go "no! i must win! i believe in myself! i will beat you!" and it ends up very corny a majority of the time. when i think of solid lyrical sections, they are always SHORT and ONE-PART.
then we get to how the lyrics will be sung. theres not much to say here except
fast lyrics + synthv as opposed to an actual va + a lot of effect + loud beat = entirely unintelligible and very much overwhelming
all of these things in combination make me very worried about the direction this song will go in
this is not intended to be insult tho (edited)
bro this song has such beautiful art direction i dont want the song itself to go to shit
16:23
i can imagine such like wonderful ideas of how this song could sound and how actually badass it could be with these sprites if it wasnt shot down from the ideas that boing has music-wise
vibre ♪
i have some concerns about the music direction of this song
nobody has to read this, this'll kinda just be a long rant a little, but i hope at least somebody understands
ill get straight into it, there is a reason dead air songs are short. they are disjointed, fast, intense songs. theyre little bursts of an experience basically. that does not translate to a long ass irida song, because the direction of these songs seem to be that they need to be long. that's not an inherently bad concept, it just doesnt work here.
then you have the fact that boing wants to make the whooole song lyrical instead of just one section. when writing very long lyrical sections, there WILL be parts that are weak. there WILL be parts that are filler. and i do not like that. with shorter lyrical sections, there is focus. there is a certain clarity. they are OODLES easier to pull off. not that longer songs with lyrics havent been done, but they were in a different context generally.
which brings me to my next point, the fact that boing wants to make this song a two-part lyrical song. in the sense that not only does one character sing, the other does too. and i will be blunt. these DONT work. the lyrics are less subtle and the focus is divided as you must now effectively flesh out TWO characters. another gripe i have with this concept is that you tend to get "banter" lyrics, in the sense that one character will go "ooo i will murder you im evil" and then the other will go "no! i must win! i believe in myself! i will beat you!" and it ends up very corny a majority of the time. when i think of solid lyrical sections, they are always SHORT and ONE-PART.
then we get to how the lyrics will be sung. theres not much to say here except
fast lyrics + synthv as opposed to an actual va + a lot of effect + loud beat = entirely unintelligible and very much overwhelming
all of these things in combination make me very worried about the direction this song will go in
this is not intended to be insult tho (edited)
i have some concerns about the music direction of this song
nobody has to read this, this'll kinda just be a long rant a little, but i hope at least somebody understands
ill get straight into it, there is a reason dead air songs are short. they are disjointed, fast, intense songs. theyre little bursts of an experience basically. that does not translate to a long ass irida song, because the direction of these songs seem to be that they need to be long. that's not an inherently bad concept, it just doesnt work here.
then you have the fact that boing wants to make the whooole song lyrical instead of just one section. when writing very long lyrical sections, there WILL be parts that are weak. there WILL be parts that are filler. and i do not like that. with shorter lyrical sections, there is focus. there is a certain clarity. they are OODLES easier to pull off. not that longer songs with lyrics havent been done, but they were in a different context generally.
which brings me to my next point, the fact that boing wants to make this song a two-part lyrical song. in the sense that not only does one character sing, the other does too. and i will be blunt. these DONT work. the lyrics are less subtle and the focus is divided as you must now effectively flesh out TWO characters. another gripe i have with this concept is that you tend to get "banter" lyrics, in the sense that one character will go "ooo i will murder you im evil" and then the other will go "no! i must win! i believe in myself! i will beat you!" and it ends up very corny a majority of the time. when i think of solid lyrical sections, they are always SHORT and ONE-PART.
then we get to how the lyrics will be sung. theres not much to say here except
fast lyrics + synthv as opposed to an actual va + a lot of effect + loud beat = entirely unintelligible and very much overwhelming
all of these things in combination make me very worried about the direction this song will go in
this is not intended to be insult tho (edited)
Last message cuz i dont wanna bury vibblez thingy
I really had passion writing JOHN in this song and then there’s DENNIS which 2 singers in this type of song wouldn’t work well. So the idea of just john singing would be better.
Whatever happens with this song, i’d still love to write it if there’s a lyric section and give it a try in va instead of synth v.
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vibre ♪
i have some concerns about the music direction of this song
nobody has to read this, this'll kinda just be a long rant a little, but i hope at least somebody understands
ill get straight into it, there is a reason dead air songs are short. they are disjointed, fast, intense songs. theyre little bursts of an experience basically. that does not translate to a long ass irida song, because the direction of these songs seem to be that they need to be long. that's not an inherently bad concept, it just doesnt work here.
then you have the fact that boing wants to make the whooole song lyrical instead of just one section. when writing very long lyrical sections, there WILL be parts that are weak. there WILL be parts that are filler. and i do not like that. with shorter lyrical sections, there is focus. there is a certain clarity. they are OODLES easier to pull off. not that longer songs with lyrics havent been done, but they were in a different context generally.
which brings me to my next point, the fact that boing wants to make this song a two-part lyrical song. in the sense that not only does one character sing, the other does too. and i will be blunt. these DONT work. the lyrics are less subtle and the focus is divided as you must now effectively flesh out TWO characters. another gripe i have with this concept is that you tend to get "banter" lyrics, in the sense that one character will go "ooo i will murder you im evil" and then the other will go "no! i must win! i believe in myself! i will beat you!" and it ends up very corny a majority of the time. when i think of solid lyrical sections, they are always SHORT and ONE-PART.
then we get to how the lyrics will be sung. theres not much to say here except
fast lyrics + synthv as opposed to an actual va + a lot of effect + loud beat = entirely unintelligible and very much overwhelming
all of these things in combination make me very worried about the direction this song will go in
this is not intended to be insult tho (edited)
Only evil john and boing bingus will sing but I do want this song to be longer due to the gimmick we got planned where evil john runs out into the forest and boing bingus has to find him
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I do want it to be fully lyrical because it's inspired from dead air and NOT dead air
the of the song would have a cut scene of real-life footage of
Boing/Dennis walking through the forest, and then Evil John
hovers over Dennis's shoulder. Dennis feels like he is being watched then Dennis then turns around(edited)
My work for Irida “THE CORPSE IS MOCKING ME” Before song was scrapped cuz idk but its ok.
I wrote all the lyric in this song (i’m only showing quarter of lyrics here cuz i don’t like my work i’m not confident
I’ll be write the new ones and make writing better️
#shuckybanger
@Boing Bingus ok im going a different direction with this
more like how i originally envisioned it
trynna make evil john a lot more menacing kind of
have a little section done right now and its going a lot better
the generic fnf rock just wasnt cutting it i have a lot more room to explore now(edited)
@Boing Bingus ok im going a different direction with this
more like how i originally envisioned it
trynna make evil john a lot more menacing kind of
have a little section done right now and its going a lot better
the generic fnf rock just wasnt cutting it i have a lot more room to explore now (edited)
i think i'll keep this part very similer but the other bits i'll probably redo
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early test lol
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wait @vibre ♪ once you finish current corpse do you wanna hop on themod i'm reusing this motifs for(edited)
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saves me transcribing and whatnot we coudl collab
vibre ♪
@Boing Bingus ok im going a different direction with this
more like how i originally envisioned it
trynna make evil john a lot more menacing kind of
have a little section done right now and its going a lot better
the generic fnf rock just wasnt cutting it i have a lot more room to explore now (edited)
oh yea i guess i could just do that but i was thinking of making jeffys part more detached not like in a jarring sense but more in a song sense i guess idk how i can explains
vibre ♪
oh yea i guess i could just do that but i was thinking of making jeffys part more detached not like in a jarring sense but more in a song sense i guess idk how i can explains
@RedWave 1.0 You are banned from 3d modeling as I wanna do this my way along with dylopad AND I DON'T WANT YOUR IDEAS TO NOT RUIN THIS AS PARALLAX I'm not being mean and I'm not angry
idk if yall alr doing this or not but the song is deadass called the corpse is mocking me soo evil johns chrom should be like a fukced up merge of a jeffy and boing chromatic
i relistened and like this is a generational intro soo goated
evilbuzz
idk if yall alr doing this or not but the song is deadass called the corpse is mocking me soo evil johns chrom should be like a fukced up merge of a jeffy and boing chromatic
@vibre ♪@Ms.munchie ok so I have a different ending idea for the corpse is mocking me and we'll use the unused ending for the game over
It ends with boing bingus hung on a tree and John is dancing in the bg
Boing Bingus
@vibre ♪@Ms.munchie ok so I have a different ending idea for the corpse is mocking me and we'll use the unused ending for the game over
It ends with boing bingus hung on a tree and John is dancing in the bg
@vibre ♪@Ms.munchie ok so I have a different ending idea for the corpse is mocking me and we'll use the unused ending for the game over
It ends with boing bingus hung on a tree and John is dancing in the bg
@vibre ♪@Ms.munchie ok so I have a different ending idea for the corpse is mocking me and we'll use the unused ending for the game over
It ends with boing bingus hung on a tree and John is dancing in the bg